The New Tale of the Great Wall
Wong Cheuk Yan, Group 1: Fiction, Lingnan University Alumni Association Primary School Hong Kong
i, my name is Adrienne. This is my story about the Great Wall.
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Before Christmas, God told me and my best friend Jaydon that a soldier of Mongolia took special
icine, so he could sleep for six hundred years. He slept in a cave in a mountain but no one saw
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After 600 hundred years when he woke up, he changed his name to Naughty Naughty. The only
g in his mind is …… To Break The Great Wall…..
Naughty Naughty pretended to be a visitor , he climbed to the top of the Great Wall. Then, he took out a
hammer to break the Wall. Super Adrienne and Supper Jaydon knew that Naughty Naughty was breaking the
Wall. So, we pretended to be visitors to the Great Wall, too.
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We traced and traced. Finally, we discovered Naughty Naughty and found that he was breaking the Wall.
Super Adrienne asked, “Naughty Naughty, what are you doing? Stop where you are…”
Naughty Naughty said, “I’m repairing the wall. Don’t annoy me please, ok??” Super Jaydon said, “hoo…
hoo… you are not fixing the Wall, because you are using the hammer to break it.” Super Adrienne asked, “Do
you know how long the Great Wall is?” She said patiently. “Oh! I don’t know,” said Naughty Naughty
scratching his head. Super Jaydon told him. “It’s 8852. Why didn’t you know?” he said. “Woo… I forgot that,”
said Naughty Naughty with his face looked so awful.
Then, Super Adrienne and Super Jaydon pretended to leave the Great Wall. But, they hid in a fortress and
saw Naughty Naughty putting gun powder in the Wall.
At that moment, Super Adrienne and Super Jaydon used their magic to bring them some Super Policemen.
At the same time, Naughty Naughty also made himself the Naughty Soldiers with the mud. Ooooh, They fought
fiercely together.
At first, it’s because some of the policemen didn’t have enough bullet. So, Super Adrienne and Super
Jaydon felt worry and scared. However, they decided to work together to make more bullets with magic again.
And, at last, they won.
The Super Policemen caught Naughty Naughty and brought him to the Judge. They asked the Judge to
punish him for breaking the precious Great Wall and put him in jail.
We removed the gun powder from the Wall. God gave us new duties – it is to protect the Great Wall. We
stayed and slept in on of the houses on the Great Wall. We even taught the children there how to protect the
Wall.
Back in the jail, Naughty Naughty finally knew, what he has done, was wrong. So, he became a good guy
now. He understood that the Great Wall was precious and valuable. More, he also assisted the Supers to protect
the Great Wall. Then, the Supers could have more time to educate the people there.
God gave Naughty Naughty, Super Adrienne and Super Jaydon each a special telephone-watch. So, we
could call each other if there came some other bad people who wanted to damage the Wall again.
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